diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
index ae11860320..c60c072fef 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
@@ -2137,7 +2137,7 @@
.config file.
Configuration items that appear twice in the same
configuration fragment.
- Configuration items tagged as "required" were overridden.
+ Configuration items tagged as "required" that were overridden.
A board overrides a non-board specific option.
Listed options not valid for the kernel being processed.
@@ -2241,8 +2241,8 @@
The first step is to create a layer so you can isolate your changes:
- $cd ~/poky
- $mkdir meta-mylayer
+ $ cd ~/poky
+ $ mkdir meta-mylayer
Creating a directory that follows the Yocto Project layer naming
conventions sets up the layer for your changes.
@@ -2309,7 +2309,7 @@
Edit the init/calibrate.c file to have the
following changes:
- void __cpuinit calibrate_delay(void)
+ void calibrate_delay(void)
{
unsigned long lpj;
static bool printed;
@@ -2675,12 +2675,12 @@
The following list presents the overall steps you need to
consider and perform to create distributions with smaller
- root filesystems, faster boot times, maintain your critical
+ root filesystems, achieve faster boot times, maintain your critical
functionality, and avoid initial RAM disks:
Determine your goals and guiding
principles.
- Understand what gives your image size.
+ Understand what contributes to your image size.
Reduce the size of the root filesystem.
@@ -2726,7 +2726,7 @@
- Understand What Gives Your Image Size
+ Understand What Contributes to Your Image Size
It is easiest to have something to start with when creating
@@ -2754,7 +2754,7 @@
Memory consists of static, dynamic, and temporary memory.
Static memory is the TEXT (code), DATA (initialized data
in the code), and BSS (uninitialized data) sections.
- Dynamic memory contains memory that is allocated at runtime,
+ Dynamic memory represents memory that is allocated at runtime:
stacks, hash tables, and so forth.
Temporary memory is recovered after the boot process.
This memory consists of memory used for decompressing
@@ -2830,8 +2830,8 @@
You can apply a filter to the script to ignore files under
a certain size.
- This example filters out anything below 100 Kbytes.
- The sizes reported by the tool are uncompressed and thus,
+ The previous example filters out any files below 100 Kbytes.
+ The sizes reported by the tool are uncompressed, and thus
will be smaller by a relatively constant factor in a
compressed root filesystem.
When you examine your log file, you can focus on areas of the
@@ -2861,7 +2861,7 @@
- Use the local.conf file to make changes.
+ Use your local.conf file to make changes.
For example, to eliminate udev and
glib, set the following in the
local configuration file:
@@ -2880,7 +2880,7 @@
using initramfs.
Be aware that ext3 requires a 1 Mbyte
journal.
- If you are okay with running read-only you do not need this
+ If you are okay with running read-only, you do not need this
journal.
@@ -2901,7 +2901,7 @@
aspects.
What subsystems do you enable?
For what architecture are you building?
- Which drivers do you build by default.
+ Which drivers do you build by default?
You can modify the kernel source if you want to help
with boot time.
@@ -2920,7 +2920,7 @@
taken up with the built-in .o files for
drivers, networking, core kernel files, filesystem, sound,
and so forth.
- The sizes reported by the tool are uncompressed and thus,
+ The sizes reported by the tool are uncompressed, and thus
will be smaller by a relatively constant factor in a compressed
kernel image.
Look to reduce the areas that are large and taking up around
@@ -4413,7 +4413,7 @@
Supporting a read-only root filesystem requires that the system and
applications do not try to write to the root filesystem.
You must configure all parts of the target system to write
- elsewhere, or to gracefully fail in the event of failing to
+ elsewhere, or to gracefully fail in the event of attempting to
write to the root filesystem.