documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml: Robert P. J. Edits

Robert isolated a few technical errors and made some other wording
suggestions.  I took the technical corrections and modified one
of his suggested wording changes.

(From yocto-docs rev: 3c6bbae05cdf2265e04d967050354ce75d62b4e2)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
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Robert P. J. Day 2011-11-02 13:05:20 -07:00 committed by Richard Purdie
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While the Yocto Project does not provide a strict testing framework, While the Yocto Project does not provide a strict testing framework,
it does provide or generate for you artifacts that let you perform target-level and it does provide or generate for you artifacts that let you perform target-level and
emulated testing and debugging. emulated testing and debugging.
And, if you are an <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark> Additionally, if you are an <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark>
IDE user, you can install an Eclipse Yocto Plug-in to allow you to IDE user, you can install an Eclipse Yocto Plug-in to allow you to
develop within that familiar environment. develop within that familiar environment.
</para> </para>
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Once you have the tarball, just extract it into a directory of your choice.</para> Once you have the tarball, just extract it into a directory of your choice.</para>
<para>For example, the following command extracts the Yocto Project 1.1 release tarball <para>For example, the following command extracts the Yocto Project 1.1 release tarball
into the current working directory and sets up the Yocto Project file structure into the current working directory and sets up the Yocto Project file structure
with a top-level directory named <filename>poky-1.1</filename>: with a top-level directory named <filename>poky-edison-6.0</filename>:
<literallayout class='monospaced'> <literallayout class='monospaced'>
$ tar xfj poky-edison-6.0.tar.bz2 $ tar xfj poky-edison-6.0.tar.bz2
</literallayout></para> </literallayout></para>
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<filename>meta-intel</filename> <filename>meta-intel</filename>
Git repository inside the <filename>poky</filename> Git repository. Git repository inside the <filename>poky</filename> Git repository.
<literallayout class='monospaced'> <literallayout class='monospaced'>
$cd poky $ cd poky
$ git clone git://git.yoctoproject.org/meta-intel.git $ git clone git://git.yoctoproject.org/meta-intel.git
Initialized empty Git repository in /home/scottrif/poky/meta-intel/.git/ Initialized empty Git repository in /home/scottrif/poky/meta-intel/.git/
remote: Counting objects: 1325, done. remote: Counting objects: 1325, done.
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<listitem><para>Optionally ensure the <filename>conf/local.conf</filename> configuration file is set <listitem><para>Optionally ensure the <filename>conf/local.conf</filename> configuration file is set
up how you want it. up how you want it.
This file defines the target machine architecture and other build options.</para></listitem> This file defines the target machine architecture and other build options.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Build the image using the BitBake command. <listitem><para>Build the image using the <command>bitbake</command> command.
If you want information on Bitbake, see the user manual at If you want information on Bitbake, see the user manual at
<ulink url='http://docs.openembedded.org/bitbake/html'></ulink>.</para></listitem> <ulink url='http://docs.openembedded.org/bitbake/html'></ulink>.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Run the image either on the actual hardware or using the QEMU <listitem><para>Run the image either on the actual hardware or using the QEMU