diff --git a/documentation/kernel-dev/kernel-dev-common.xml b/documentation/kernel-dev/kernel-dev-common.xml
index 3645a5acdd..96c7933805 100644
--- a/documentation/kernel-dev/kernel-dev-common.xml
+++ b/documentation/kernel-dev/kernel-dev-common.xml
@@ -449,9 +449,10 @@
To help you use your own sources, the Yocto Project provides a
linux-yocto custom recipe
- linux-yocto-custom.bb that uses
+ (linux-yocto-custom.bb) that uses
kernel.org sources
- and the Yocto Project Linux kernel tools for managing Metadata.
+ and the Yocto Project Linux kernel tools for managing
+ kernel Metadata.
You can find this recipe in the
poky Git repository of the
Yocto Project Source Repository
@@ -469,7 +470,7 @@
The name should include the version of the Linux kernel you
are using (e.g. linux-yocto-myproject_3.5.bb,
where "3.5" is the base version of the Linux kernel
- with which you would be working.
+ with which you would be working).
In the same directory inside your layer,
create a matching directory
to store your patches and configuration files (e.g.
@@ -489,7 +490,7 @@
LINUX_VERSION:
The Linux kernel version you are using (e.g.
- "3.6.3").
+ "3.4").
LINUX_VERSION_EXTENSION:
The Linux kernel CONFIG_LOCALVERSION
that is compiled into the resulting kernel and visible
@@ -508,8 +509,11 @@
The default PV assignment is
typically adequate.
It combines the LINUX_VERSION
- with the SCM revision (from the SRCPV variable)
- and results in a string using the following form:
+ with the Source Control Manager (SCM) revision
+ as derived from the SRCPV
+ variable.
+ The combined results are a string with
+ the following form:
3.4.11+git1+68a635bf8dfb64b02263c1ac80c948647cc76d5f_1+218bd8d2022b9852c60d32f0d770931e3cf343e2
@@ -522,7 +526,8 @@
This variable in the example recipe is set
by default to a regular expression that matches
only the empty string, "(^$)".
- This default setting triggers an explicit build failure.
+ This default setting triggers an explicit build
+ failure.
You must change it to match a list of the machines
that your new recipe supports.
For example, to support the qemux86