[IMP] improved modules message at installation --> to be reviewed later

bzr revid: fp@openerp.com-20120805201322-y8ghspcb69wmb3ut

addons/account_accountant/account_accountant_data.xml

@@ -26,12 +26,10 @@
         <function model="mail.group" name="message_append_note">
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
-            <value>Module Accounting and Finance has been installed</value>
+            <value>Module Accounting and Finance has been installed.</value>
-            <value>From the top menu Accounting, manage all of your accounting:
+            <value>With OpenERP's accounting, you can get an instant access to all your financial data, setup your analytic accounting, forecast your taxes, control your budgets, easily create and send invoices, record bank statements, etc.
-                general accounting, cost/analytic accounting, third party
+
-                accounting, taxes, budgets, customer and supplier invoices,
+The accounting features are fully integrated with others OpenERP applications to automate all your processes: creation of customer invoices, control of supplier invoices, point-of-sale integration, automated follow-ups, etc.</value>
-                bank statements, reconciliation process.
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/account_voucher/account_voucher_data.xml

@@ -5,15 +5,12 @@
         <function model="mail.group" name="message_append_note">
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
-            <value>Module eInvoicing &amp; Payments has been installed</value>
+            <value>Module eInvoicing &amp; Payments has been installed.</value>
-            <value>From the top menu Invoicing, manage your customer and supplier
+            <value>OpenERP's electronic invoicing allows to ease and fasten the creation of invoices and collection of customer payments. Invoices are created in a few clicks and your customers receive them by email. They can pay online and/or import them in their own system.
-                invoices.  You can also manage refunds, receipts and register
-                payments.
 
-                In order to manage all accounting features (journal items,
+You can track customer payments easily and automate the reminders. You get an overview of the discussion with your customers on each invoice to ensure a full traceability.
-                chart of accounts, etc), you should install the module
+
-                "Accounting and Finance".
+If you want to use advanced accounting features, you should install the "Accounting and Finance" module.</value>
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/crm/crm_data.xml

@@ -36,21 +36,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module CRM has been installed</value>
-            <value>From the top menu Sales, manage your sales pipeline: leads,
+            <value>From the top menu Sales, you can: trace leads and opportunities, get accurate forecast on your sales pipeline, plan meetings and phonecalls, get realtime statistics and efficiently organize the communication with your prospects.
-                opportunities, meetings, phone calls, and customers.  OpenERP
-                ensures that all cases are successfully tracked by all parties.
-                It can automatically send reminders, escalate requests, trigger
-                specific methods and lots of other actions based on your own
-                enterprise rules.
 
-                In the Sales settings, you can configure an email gateway to
+To manage quotations and sale orders, install the module "Sales Management".</value>
-                automatically create leads from messages sent on a particular
-                email address.
-
-                To manage quotations and sale orders, install the module "Sales
-                Management".  With this module, you will be able to create
-                quotations directly from opportunities.
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/event/event_data.xml

@@ -18,10 +18,7 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Events Organisation has been installed</value>
-            <value>Organize events and manage their registrations.  You can
+            <value>From the top menu Events, you can organize events, manage registrations, automate communication around your event and sell events through your quotations.</value>
-                automatically confirm and send acknowledgements of registrations
-                by email.
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/hr/hr_data.xml

@@ -6,17 +6,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Employee Directory has been installed</value>
-            <value>Manage your human resources in OpenERP: employees and hierarchy,
+            <value>Manage your human resources in OpenERP: employees and hierarchy, HR departments and jobs.
-                HR departments and jobs.
 
-                More features are available in the following modules:
+More HR features are available from the following modules: Recruitment Process (manage job positions and recruitment), Timesheets Validation (record timesheets and attendance), Leaves Management (keep track of employee leaves), Expenses Management (manage employee expenses), Employee Appraisals (organize employee surveys, where employees evaluate their subordinates or their manager.)</value>
-                Recruitment Process (manage job positions and recruitment),
-                Timesheets Validation (record timesheets and attendance),
-                Leaves Management (keep track of employee leaves),
-                Expenses Management (manage employee expenses),
-                Employee Appraisals (organize employee surveys, where employees
-                evaluate their subordinates or their manager.)
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <record id="employee" model="hr.employee">

addons/hr_evaluation/hr_evaluation_data.xml

@@ -18,11 +18,7 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Employee Appraisals has been installed</value>
-            <value>Create evaluations for your subordinates or manager.  You can
+            <value>Create evaluations for your subordinates or manager. You can define a plan with several surveys, where you organize evaluation surveys related to the hierarchy levels. Evaluations filled by employees can exported as pdf files.</value>
-                define a plan with several surveys, where you organize evaluation
-                surveys related to the hierarchy levels.  Evaluations filled by
-                employees can exported as pdf files.
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <record id="survey_2" model="survey">

addons/hr_expense/hr_expense_data.xml

@@ -6,14 +6,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Expenses Management has been installed</value>
-            <value>Manage your employee's expenses, with validations by employee
+            <value>Manage your employee's expenses, with validations by employee manager and accountant, creation and payment of invoices.
-                manager and accountant, creation and payment of invoice.
 
-                This module also uses the analytic accounting and is compatible
+This module also uses the analytic accounting and is compatible with the invoice on timesheet module so that you will be able to automatically re-invoice your customer's expenses if your work by project.</value>
-                with the invoice on timesheet module so that you will be able to
-                automatically re-invoice your customer's expenses if your work
-                by project.
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <!-- Resource: product.uom.categ -->

addons/hr_holidays/hr_holidays_data.xml

@@ -17,12 +17,7 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Leaves Management has been installed</value>
-            <value>Manage employee leaves from the top menu "Human Resources."
+            <value>Manage employee leaves from the top menu "Human Resources". Employees can create leave requests that are validated by their manager and/or HR people.  Once validated, they are visible in the employee's calendar.  HR people can define leave types and allocate off-days for employees.</value>
-                Employees can create leave requests that are validated by their
-                manager and/or HR people.  Once validated, they are visible in
-                the employee's calendar.  HR people can define leave types and
-                allocate off-days for employees.
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <!-- Casual leave -->

addons/hr_recruitment/hr_recruitment_data.xml

@@ -6,14 +6,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Recruitment Process has been installed</value>
-            <value>
+            <value>Manage job positions and the recruitment process in your company.  This module is integrated with the module Survey to help you to define interviews for different jobs.
-                Manage job positions and the recruitment process in your company.
-                This module is integrated with the module Survey to help you to
-                define interviews for different jobs.
 
-                You can automatically create application records from an email
+You can automatically create application records from an email gateway, that you can configure in the Human Resources Settings.</value>
-                gateway, that you can configure in the Human Resources Settings.
-            </value>
         </function>
 
     <!-- Meeting Types (for interview meetings) -->

addons/hr_timesheet_sheet/hr_timesheet_sheet_data.xml

@@ -6,9 +6,7 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Timesheets Validation has been installed</value>
-            <value>From the top menu "Human Resources", encode and validate
+            <value>From the top menu "Human Resources", encode and validate timesheets and attendances.</value>
-                timesheets and attendances.
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <record id="ir_actions_server_timsheet_sheet" model="ir.actions.server">

addons/mrp/mrp_data.xml

@@ -6,14 +6,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module MRP has been installed</value>
-            <value>Manage your manufacturing process in OpenERP by defining bill
+            <value>Manage your manufacturing process in OpenERP by defining bill of materials (BoM), routings and work centers.  This module supports complete integration and planification of stockable goods, consumable, and services.
-                of materials (BoM), routings and work centers.  This module
-                supports complete integration and planification of stockable
-                goods, consumable, and services.
 
-                From the Manufacturing Settings, you can choose to compute
+From the Manufacturing Settings, you can choose to compute production schedules periodically or just-in-time.</value>
-                production schedules periodically or just-in-time.
-            </value>
         </function>
         
         <record id="sequence_mrp_prod_type" model="ir.sequence.type">

addons/point_of_sale/point_of_sale_data.xml

@@ -25,14 +25,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Point of Sale has been installed</value>
-            <value>Encode sale orders, register payments, compute money to return,
+            <value>Encode sale orders, register payments, compute money to return, create invoices, and manage refunds of former sales through a specific, web-based, touch-screen user interface.
-                create invoices, and manage refunds of former sales through a
-                specific, web-based, user interface.
 
-                Simply click on the top menu "Point of Sale" to launch its
+If you install the PoS proxy, you will be able to interface OpenERP with retail materials; barcode scanners, printers, cash registers, weighing machine, credit card payments.</value>
-                interface.  You can configure your point of sale and perform
-                backend operations in the menu "PoS Backend".
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/project/project_data.xml

@@ -69,15 +69,9 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Project Management has been installed</value>
-            <value>Manage multi-level projects and tasks.  You can delegate tasks,
+            <value>Manage multi-level projects and tasks.  You can delegate tasks, track the work done on tasks, and review your planning based on the entered data.
-                track the work done on tasks, and review your planning based on
-                the entered data.
 
-                You can manage todo lists on tasks by installing the module
+You can manage todo lists on tasks by installing the module "Todo Lists", which supports the methodology Getting Things Done (GTD).  You can also manage issues/bugs in projects by installing the module "Issues Tracker."</value>
-                "Todo Lists", which supports the methodology Getting Things
-                Done (GTD).  You can also manage issues/bugs in projects by
-                installing the module "Issues Tracker."
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/project_gtd/project_gtd_data.xml

@@ -30,12 +30,7 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Todo Lists has been installed</value>
-            <value>
+            <value>Add todo items on project tasks, to help you organize your work.  This module supports the methodology Getting Things Done (GTD), created by David Allen, and described in the book of the same name.</value>
-                Add todo items on project tasks, to help you organize your work.
-                This module supports the methodology Getting Things Done (GTD),
-                created by David Allen, and described in the book of the same
-                name.
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/project_issue/project_issue_data.xml

@@ -35,15 +35,10 @@
         <function model="mail.group" name="message_append_note">
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
-            <value>Module Issues Tracker has been installed</value>
+            <value>Module Issues Tracker has been installed.</value>
-            <value>Manage the issues you might face in a project, like bugs in a
+            <value>Manage the issues you might face in a project, like bugs in a system, client complaints or material breakdowns.  You can record issues, assign them to some responsible person, and keep track of their status as they evolve over time.
-                system, client complaints or material breakdowns.  You can
-                record issues, assign them to some responsible person, and keep
-                track of their status as they evolve over time.
 
-                You can access issues from the top menu Project, and access the
+You can access issues from the top menu Project, and access the issues of a specific project from the projects gallery view.</value>
-                issues of a specific project from the projects gallery view.
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/purchase/purchase_data.xml

@@ -6,14 +6,10 @@
         <function model="mail.group" name="message_append_note">
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
-            <value>Module Purchase Management has been installed</value>
+            <value>Module Purchase Management has been installed.</value>
-            <value>From the top menu Purchases, create purchase orders to buy
+            <value>From the top menu Purchases, create purchase orders to buy products from your suppliers, encode supplier invoices and manage your payments.
-                products from your suppliers, encode supplier invoices and
-                manage your payments.
 
-                You can also manage purchase requisitions, see the Purchase
+You can also manage purchase requisitions, see the Purchase Settings.</value>
-                Settings.
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <record id="req_link_purchase_order" model="res.request.link">

addons/sale/sale_data.xml

@@ -42,8 +42,7 @@
             <value>The Sales Management application has been installed.</value>
             <value>&lt;b&gt;Click on the top menu &lt;i&gt;'Sales'&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/em&gt; to start managing your customers, sending quotations and processing sale orders.
 
-If you need to manage your sales pipeline (leads, opportunities, phonecalls), you can install the module &lt;i&gt;CRM&lt;/i&gt; from the top menu Settings.
+If you need to manage your sales pipeline (leads, opportunities, phonecalls), you can install the module &lt;i&gt;CRM&lt;/i&gt; from the top menu Settings.</value>
-            </value>
         </function>
     </data>
 </openerp>

addons/stock/stock_data.xml

@@ -6,11 +6,7 @@
             <!-- ids, subject, body, parent_id=False, type='notification', content_subtype='html' -->
             <value eval="[ref('mail.group_all_employees')]"/>
             <value>Module Warehouse Management has been installed</value>
-            <value>Manage your product inventoy and stock locations.  You can
+            <value>Manage your product inventoy and stock locations.  You can control your stock moves history and planning, perform stock valuation, and trace product lots upstream and downstream (based on serial numbers.)</value>
-                control your stock moves history and planning, perform stock
-                valuation, and trace product lots upstream and downstream
-                (based on serial numbers.)
-            </value>
         </function>
 
         <record id="stock_journal_sequence" model="ir.sequence">